Author Interview: Sarina Louise, from The Author Conservatory to getting published!

Hey Spinning Pen Readers and Writers! We have a treat for you today! Debut Author, Sarina Louise is going to share her writing journey from The Young Writer’s Workshop to the highly-praised ‘Author Conservatory’ and getting published in the Voices of the Future Anthology.

SP: Hi S! We’re so excited to have you here on the Spinning Pen! Tell us all a little bit about you and your writing journey.

SL: Hey SP! Thank you so much for having me; I’m so excited to get to chat with you guys today. That’s a great question. I am 22, almost 23, and I’ve loved stories for as long as I can remember. In fact, when I was a little kid, I used to force my babysitter to write down the ones my sister and I made up. *laughs* but I actually ended up taking a significant break from writing when I was 15, and never thought that I would go back to it. I’ve never been more glad to be wrong. 

In 2019, I stumbled on The Young Writer’s Workshop, which is an online writing program that showed me it was possible to pursue writing seriously. From there, I attended The Author Conservatory, which is a three-year college alternative program for gifted writers. I graduated in June of 2024 and am now working on beginning my writing career! 

SP: Ok now for the bookish part we’ve been waiting for…tell us about THE POET WHO LIVED ON PICKPOCKET LANE! How did the idea come to you? Favorite parts of writing it? 

SL: I love this question so much! I actually came up with the idea for the story on a Zoom call with one of my best friends. I was on deadline to come up with three short story concepts for a school assignment, so I decided to head over to Pinterest. I found a picture of an apartment listing in a newspaper and it said “NO TEENAGERS, PETS, OR POETS”. I’d had a poet character who had been in my head since probably 2021 and as soon as I saw that picture, he came to life and the story was born! 

One of my favorite parts of writing this project was working with the poems. I actually always used to say that I would never publish any poetry because, for me at least, I write poems when I am in really vulnerable places and emotions. But this was a whole different process, because I was writing poetry from the perspective of my main character, rather than myself, and was writing poetry on deadline instead of just for fun. It was really difficult, but such a fun exercise to stretch me creatively. 

The Poet Who Lived on Pickpocket Lane by Sarina Louise

“Elias Thornbury hasn’t written poetry in a year. Not since his wife, Rosa, passed away. His poems bring memories to life, and he’s not ready for that kind of pain. Then his six-year-old daughter, Nina, asks for a birthday poem. Just like the ones Elias used to write when their family was whole. 

Desperate to find new inspiration so his poem doesn’t hurt Nina, Elias embarks on a journey through London. But as memories of Rosa haunt his every step, he must decide whether to continue suppressing his grief, or face it, and realize it’s been love all along.” 

SP: Since this is your debut publication, we’d love to hear about what else you have in the works. Can you tell us anything about your other projects? 

SL: Oh, that’s such a hard question, because I always want to spill more than I should. *laughs* What I can tell you is that, as a part of The Author Conservatory, I wrote two full length novels (and spawned ideas for many, many more). 

One of those novels, which I like to call Project Reaper, is currently in the final editing stages. I’m working on polishing it up and then am planning on pitching it at conferences and querying it in early 2025. “Darker By Four meets Belladonna in a YA paranormal fantasy novel about a girl with cancer and the Grim Reaper who doesn’t want to kill her.” It’s deliciously angsty and swoon worthy and has been such a fun project to work on!

Other than that, I’m juggling a ton of other projects around and letting them percolate and figure themselves out. My main focus right now is starting the pitching process!

SP: You keep mentioning the Author Conservatory. Tell us a little bit about your experience in the program.

SL: *laughs* uh oh, I’ll have to try and keep this answer concise. The Author Conservatory has both a writing track and a business track and is designed to teach students how to have sustainable careers as authors. The short answer to your question is that it was one of the best, and most difficult, things I’ve ever done. It taught me everything I know about marketing, pitching, querying, and business, which were the areas that I struggled the most in. 

And the relationships I’ve built with the faculty and students are ones that I hope and pray will be in my life for a very long time. The program is focused around mentorship, which means that I received personalized feedback from writing and business professionals for over three years, and that instruction is something I will treasure for my whole life. It has grown and honed my writing skills, business skills, and me as a person so much. 

SP: What are some of the dream goals you’d like to reach? 

SL: I love this question so much! I feel like I have career goals, like getting published by a Gig Five publisher, or hitting the NYT Bestseller. But my main dream goal actually has more to do with the type of life that I want to live. 

Right now, one of my biggest dream goals is to move to Korea and live there for a bit. I’m not sure for how long, or whether I’d stay there long term, but I am just so fascinated by the culture and the country (and of course, the food). I’ve always wanted to live abroad, ever since I was a little girl. Travel is one of my favorite things and getting to experience new cultures and new people makes my heart so happy. 

I know this is probably a different answer than you were expecting, but I feel like I’m a bit more relaxed about my writing career. I’m trusting that I’m where I’m supposed to be and letting the doors open naturally and organically. 

SP: How did you decide to write this short story as an Adult story, when your novel is Young Adult?

SL: I wish I had a super intellectual answer for this, but *laughs* that was sort of an accident. Because of the premise of the story, where Elias has to write a poem for his daughter, I needed Nina to be old enough to understand the poem and also the fact that she’d lost her mother. Therefore, Elias would need to be older, since he and Rosa married before they had Nina. So Elias just wasn’t in the age bracket that would make him a YA protagonist, so the story naturally fell in the Adult category. The themes and the writing style also put it more in the Adult category anyway, so it all ended up working out! 

SP: Time for the lightning round! Early bird or night owl?

SL: Oh, night owl, 100%. I love staying up late and have spent a lot of this month curled up on my Yogibo in my bedroom, writing away. I find that I write my best prose wicked late at night. It’s great for my writing, but not so great for my sleep schedule. 

SP: Most obscure hobby?

SL: I’m not even sure I really have hobbies, let alone an obscure one. But I love to travel, meet new people, and see the world. I do also really enjoy K-pop and K-dramas, but I think those are more full-time jobs than hobbies. 

SP: Word you can never spell? This may be a trick question.

SL: This is such a funny question because I was JUST talking to my mom about a word that I hate spelling, but have to write basically every day for my job. It makes me feel like a failure as a writer. But I just cannot spell the word “entrepreneurship” correctly. I never get it on the first try and it frustrates me so much. 

SP: Alright, time’s up! We’re so sad to see you go! BUT…there’s way more where this came from.To check out SL’s book, go HERE. To connect with her on Instagram, go HERE. To check out her website, go HERE. Thank you so much for your time, SL!

SL: Thank you so much for having me! This was so much fun.

Author Interview: Rebecca Alexandru

Hey Readers and Writers! It’s time for a lovely debut indie author interview to kick off our month of December! Her book just released and she was even interviewed on TV! We’d loved her premise, and we think you will too…check it out!

SP: Hi Rebecca! We’re so excited to have you here on the Spinning Pen! Tell us all a little bit about you and your writing journey.

RA: Thank you! I have been writing for over a decade now and love multiple genres. I have projects I’m working on varying from kids’ picture books, MG scifi, YA fantasy, and adult dystopian novels. And if that isn’t enough, I love to change it up by writing screenplays. My favorite part of any book is the character growth. I think that’s what draws me to stories in the first place. 

SP: Ok now for the bookish part we’ve been waiting for…tell us about 12 Days to Christmas! How did the idea come to you? Favorite parts of writing it? 

RA: In 12 Days to Christmas, holiday festivities and the history of Dec 25 come together in a sweet romance filled with heart. Mira, while grieving the loss of her mother, leads her small town’s Christmas festival, linking each community event with something that happened in history on Dec 24-25. She doesn’t expect a widower and his three sons to help her heal and find the joy and magic of the season.

12 Days to Christmas is different from any of my previous works because it’s a contemporary sweet romance! I love it though because it ties in so many elements, from dealing with grief during the holidays, to intriguing historical facts, and an eclectic mix of antique and vintage finds. 

I can’t remember exactly how the idea came to me but it was probably while I was watching Hallmark Christmas movies and wondering if I could branch my writing into another genre.

SP: Since you write YA as well, how did you decide to debut with an adult romance? 

RA: This story is ready to be told! 12 Days to Christmas has been whispering to my heart for a while that I need to share it with others. Every step of its publication journey has solidified that belief…it’s no longer my story but it belongs to those who read it and connect with its message. 

SP: How did you decide to self publish? What are some of the dream goals you’d like to reach? 

RA: Choosing to self-publish took me a long time to accept because I believed a lot of the lies, wanted validation, and was literally terrified of marketing, haha. BUT when I finally took the plunge…it was FREEING! I get to choose the title, the cover, the release date, where & when I sell it. Having full creative control is liberating and I am really loving the process! To break down one of the lies of self-publishing: “not edited well” – I edited 12 Days to Christmas with a fine tooth comb and perfected everything I could. There might still be a little wiggle room for human error – but that’s just to prove I’m not AI. As for validation, my early readers have enjoyed it! Although it hasn’t been released yet, I’ve already had reviews like “This book was written for me” and that means more than a corporation stamping their approval. I write for real people, not mega-businesses seeking profits. As for marketing…I’ll answer that in the next question…

One important step in encouraging me that I could self-publish successfully was watching two of my writing group buddies do amazing with their own books! So this is a special shout out to Callie McLay and her book What If We Met in A Bookstore, because her guidance made my dream become a reality! I’m also thankful for Nova McBee, Candace Kade, and M.T. Solomon for their support! If you haven’t read their books yet – go read them! Having friends who are writers has been pivotal in encouragement, pursuing publication, and ultimately being able to share 12 Days to Christmas with you! 

SP: What’s one or two craft techniques or marketing tips you would recommend to other writers? (We LOVE your reels by the way!)

RA: Marketing has been a learning curve but it’s becoming fun! (Although I can’t wait til January when I can just hibernate the entire month, lol). 

I knew the 12 historical events in 12 Days to Christmas needed Reels to explain the history in the book. Those, paired with the fun I’m having on Canva, has been a creative outlet that I enjoy sharing with others. 

Little tidbits: Many times my cameraman is one of my sons. My 11yo son edited my first reel! They also helped inspire some of the characters in the book.

The main marketing tip I’ve learned from other writers and have tried to practice myself is: Have fun! I keep it interesting by changing up my outfits or decorating for Christmas in September. And on the days it’s difficult, I’ve learned that pushing myself to learn and do something new is rewarding. While I dreaded the idea of making videos and showing my face on SM, it’s actually been growing easier and I’m finding enjoyment in it…especially when I can act goofy.

SP: You’re a YA fiction writer and a screenwriter too. Tell us about this? 

RA: I have a YA fantasy dragon trilogy I’ve been working on for several years and will publish it when I have the series complete. I also love writing screenplays because I can write a story the way I visualize it. In fact, I finished the screenplay of 12 Days to Christmas before I completed the novel! If anyone is interested in partnering to make it a movie, let me know 😉

SP: Time for the lightning round! Early bird or night owl?

RA: Night owl ALLLL the way. Don’t ever wake me up before 10am, LOL

SP: Most obscure hobby?

RA: I’m a homeschool mom and writer so I don’t have lots of free time for hobbies but I do spend more time than I should watching videos: especially dashcam footage of crazy drivers and home inspectors showing all kinds of messed up houses. Does that count?

I also love watching kdramas, going thrifting, and sleeping in.

SP: Word you can never spell? This may be a trick question.

RA: Definitely. (Thank goodness for autocorrect!) Also, “horsdeouvres”…those tiny snack bites before a meal, haha.

SP: Alright, time’s up! We’re so sad to see you go! BUT…there’s way more where this came from. Where can we go to read more from you?

RA: I’m on instagram @rebeccaalexandruauthor and have all my links in my bio. Check out my website for free coloring pages and a new, exciting gift soon! (Hint: it’s connected to 12 Days to Christmas and vintage styles)

Thanks so much for your time RA! To check out RA’s series, go HERE. To connect with her on Instagram go HERE. Check out her website go HERE.

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Website: https://rebeccaalexandru.com/ 

Order book: https://happilybooked.company.site/products/12-days-to-Christmas-Pre-Order-P-p694595326 

Purchase the eBook early on Smashwords:

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1637534 
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Rebecca Alexandru

Author Interview: June Hur

Pen Friends ~ Please welcome YA Author JUNE HUR talking about her upcoming novel, THE FOREST OF STOLEN GIRLS, publishing journey, writing the second book, and so much more! I’m beyond excited to have June here with us today. Her books are gorgeous and the kindness and knowledge she shares with the writing community is priceless!


SP: Hi June! Thanks for joining us! Before we get into book stuff, we’d LOVE to know a bit about you and your writing journey?

8 years and two failed rounds of querying later, I put aside my first book and decided to work on a new project. A Korean historical mystery. I didn’t think anyone would be interested in a police drama set in 1800s Korea, but I didn’t care at this point and just wrote the book for myself. Fortunately, as I was browsing through Manuscript Wish List, I found an agent who was passionate about diverse literature, and so I decided to send a query her way. I didn’t think Amy Bishop would actually offer. But then on September 20, Amy emailed me with an offer and shared that my debut was a book she wished had existed when she was a teen.

SP: The Stolen Girls will come out April 2021 by Feiwel & Friends, Macmillan. Please add on Goodreads and check out her amazing debut, The Silence of Bones, while waiting!

Here’s the blurb for The Stolen Girls:


1426, Joseon (Korea). Hwani’s family has never been the same since she and her younger sister went missing and were later found unconscious in the forest near a gruesome crime scene.

Years later, Detective Min—Hwani’s father—learns that thirteen girls have recently disappeared from the same forest that nearly stole his daughters. He travels to their hometown on the island of Jeju to investigate… only to vanish as well.

Determined to find her father and solve the case that tore their family apart, Hwani returns home to pick up the trail. As she digs into the secrets of the small village—and collides with her now estranged sister, Maewol—Hwani comes to realize that the answer could lie within her own buried memories of what happened in the forest all those years ago.

SP: The book cover is outstanding! I’ve never seen anything quite like it! What were your thoughts when you first saw it?

When I first saw the cover, I was absolutely blown away! I thought it was so intriguing that the cover wasn’t saturated in green, as I assumed it would be, since my book’s title has the word ‘forest’ in it. Instead, in choosing white as the main color, I feel like it creates a sense of mystery and makes the word ‘forest’ pop out more due to the contrast. I also love the two girls hidden in the cover, as it really reflects the heart of the story—the search for thirteen missing girls.

SP: How long did it take you to write The Stolen Girls and how did this story come about? Was the second book harder to write than the first?

I began brainstorming this novel around two years ago, but never got around to doing anything much with it until I realized I needed to get started on my second book in the contract ASAP! I began writing it in earnest during the last half of 2019 and sent the polished draft to my editor by the spring of 2020. Writing the second book was so hard, and it was probably one of the most stressful experiences I’ve ever had to go through, mainly because I lacked the luxury of time and the freedom to fail. I spent years writing then ditching one version of THE SILENCE OF BONES for another, playing around with plot and character until I finally felt confident enough to commit to the story. But with my second book, as I was under contract as well as a deadline, I had less time to play around with ideas, and definitely not enough time to ditch one idea for another. When I wrote the first draft, I was devastated, because I wasn’t sure I liked the characters, or the plot, or the historical aspect I was focusing on. But I had to commit and it was terrifying—investing that much time into a work you know will end up getting published, but a work you’re not certain you’ll love and be proud of. In the end, THE FOREST OF STOLEN GIRLS turned out to be one of my greatest achievements. Mainly because I watched this manuscript go from being a hated second book to being a book I’m immensely proud of.

SP: Are there any characters that surprised you along the way?

Maewol, the youngest sister, surprised me. She infused the book with touches of humor, and humor is something I thought I’d never include in my books, as I tend to be very dark and melancholic when storytelling. My favorite part about writing this book was writing the last chapter, mainly because there’s a particular scene in it that I was writing toward for months.

SP: What part of the writing process do you most enjoy? The first draft? The development in revision? The final touches?

Development in revision!

SP: Any writing tip you’d like to share?

Write what scares you. The only way to grow as a writer is to constantly challenge ourselves.


A few fun questions. Is June a…
Plotter/pantster?

Plotter.

Last book you read?

If I had your face by Frances Cha

Current dream vacation spot?

Scotland

Current favorite K-Drama?

Kingdom

Would you rather be a professional: Marine Biologist? Spy? Opera Singer? Brain Surgeon? OR?

Spy.

Favorite childhood book?

Anne of Green Gables

Ellen McGinty, signing off. 

Author Interview: Sam Taylor

Pen friends~ So happy to introduce you to another of my 2016 PitchWars alum gang, Sam Taylor, who will release her debut, We Are the Fire in February 2021!

SP: Hi Sam! Thanks for joining us! Before we start talking about your debut, We Are the Fire, can you share a bit about you and your writing journey? 

ST: One of the most unique things about my journey is that I landed my book deal for WAtF before signing with an agent! That’s definitely not the usual order of events, at least for traditional publishing. WAtF was the third manuscript I’d seriously queried. It wasn’t having good luck with agents, but my wide pool of early readers loved it, and this story means so much to me personally. So I began exploring alternate paths to publication. That was when I turned to Swoon Reads (more on them below). I thought to myself, “Agents aren’t responding to this book right now, but readers love it. Maybe readers can help me get it published.” And they did!!!

SP: Can you tell us a bit about your PitchWars experience AND Querying & Agents?

ST: My Pitch Wars journey was completely unorthodox in that I was an unofficial mentee (which I don’t think they do anymore) who was made official right before the showcase. I worked on the sidelines with Kip Wilson (author of the powerful novel-in-verse WHITE ROSE) on a YA fantasy inspired by Babylonian culture and magic. It was a phenomenal experience, I learned so much from her, and turned into a dream when right before the agent showcase I was invited to become an official Pitch Wars mentee and have my story included in that showcase. But then… I didn’t get a single agent request during the showcase week. That was really hard; talk about a whirlwind of emotions! But I found so much support and strength among my fellow Pitch Wars mentees, some of whom have become good writing friends. That support kept me going as I went on to query that Babylonian fantasy–most Pitch Wars mentees still get their agents through regular querying! Alas, that book did not land me an agent, though I did come very close. WAtF was the book I worked on after Pitch Wars, by the way. Sometimes achieving that publishing dream just takes a different project.

SP: Now we want to hear all about your upcoming novel, We Are The Fire releasing with Swoon Reads/Macmillan on February 16, 2021.

Here is a blurb: 

Two magical, fire-wielding teen soldiers in love, pitted against each other as they fight to tear down the empire who kidnapped them. It’s An Ember in the Ashes with fire magic, twisted alchemy, and ash-gray morals.

SP:  How did this story idea come about?

ST: I was trapped in a work environment with some very corrupt people. No matter how much I wanted to fix things, I didn’t always know how to make the situation right, and definitely wasn’t rewarded for my efforts. I was frustrated and angry and wanted to watch something burn. So I had the idea of these characters who, with a breath and a spark, can ignite bonfires. And they have to figure out how to use this magic forced onto them to win back their freedom. The right choices aren’t always clear for them, either, and often they don’t come without steep cost. But these characters keep fighting anyway to take back their lives.

SP: Swoon Reads is very unique, can you tell us more?

ST: Swoon Reads is an imprint of Macmillan (one of the Big 5 publishers), but it is unique in that the books it publishes are selected from a website where writers are invited to post their YA manuscripts. Anyone can read these manuscripts for free, and readers are invited to rate and comment on the ones they like best. Stories with strong ratings and reviews can grab the attention of an editor at Swoon Reads. A few times a year, they’ll select manuscripts that would work well for their list, and extend an offer of publication to those authors.

SP: What was your favorite part about writing this book? Which character surprised you most?

ST: I loved the romantic and moral tension between Oksana and Pran! It was so challenging to write these two with such different perspectives on their world, yet they are united by their dedication to each other. Even–and especially!–when it seemed like they were tearing apart their world and each other, there was always that yearning for them to be together again. Emotions were always high, and that made it easy to be deeply invested in their story, even when writing it pushed me to the limits of my abilities.

Sepp surprised me the most, of all the characters! Over the course of a few drafts, she went from an extremely minor character to one who’s crucial for the story. I think readers get to see this a bit, in how on both Oksana’s and Pran’s side of the story, she goes from being a character mentioned in asides, to someone who’s always at their sides!

SP: What excites and terrifies you about your book coming into the world?

ST: I’ve been invested in all the manuscripts I’ve written, but I had a passion for this story that did not exist for my previous two manuscripts. Maybe because it came out of such a painful time in my life? This was a story I was deeply invested in, yet there was a long span of time when querying was not going well, and I really thought this book would never find its way into readers’ hands. So I’m thrilled that it does get the chance to be a real book out in the world, and it feels right that this is the book I debut with, the one that launches my author career.

As for what terrifies me… this book does get quite dark in places. There are scenes that were particularly divisive among early readers. Yet when this book is deeply exploring moral ambiguity, and the characters are trying to outsmart people who have zero scruples, and dominoes are lined up along precarious paths… there come points when the characters only have intensely difficult decisions to make. And I didn’t shy away from having the characters make them. That wouldn’t do this story justice. I just hope that I’ve done the actual writing justice, so readers can understand what I’m doing on the page, even when the story events turn dark and difficult.

SP: Writing habits — can you let us into your process/writing life? How do you get the job done? Any tips for us?

ST: My process has changed quite a bit since becoming a mother! I’ve been getting up at 5am to have some quiet time to myself while Little T still sleeps. Though I’ve always been a morning person, I never used to get up that early, and it’s definitely been challenging to stick with. But I’ve found that early morning time is crucial to getting enough work time in, especially once I had a book under contract. I also write during Little T’s naps (and thus, have kept him on a pretty strict nap schedule. He needs that sleep time to be in his best mood, and I need the break during the day to recharge and be my own person through my writing).

My advice to others is that if they want to write, they’ll need to make time for it. Find what works for you! Someone else’s schedule won’t necessarily fit, and there’s no one “right” way to make writing time happen. Doesn’t have to be early morning, or even every day. But make time for writing, and honor that time. Learn to tell other people ‘No” and defend anything that would infringe on that time (there will always be something!) Even a little time, regularly taken, can add up to a lot of words after a while.

SP: Launching during COVID 19 must be an interesting experience- in which ways have you seen positive things come of it?

ST: It’s certainly changed the experience I’d been picturing! For instance, I’d planned on attending BookExpo in NYC this past May. That’s a huge book conference lots of industry professionals attend, with so many opportunities for networking! It’s been on my radar for six years; I’d promised myself I’d attend when I had a book to promote. Early this year I’d bought my first ticket for it… alas. Next year, maybe? But a lot of online events have sprung up in place of in-person, including conferences, workshops, book festivals, and launch parties. And I have to say, I’m loving these online events and the accessibility of them all. For myself, traveling is no longer so easy, since I’m mom to a toddler, and as I write this, my second baby is a month away from being born. But with these online events, I’ve been able to participate in conferences I’d never have been able to travel to this year, even without the virus. I’ve joined in the launch parties of friends who live many states away. And I’m looking forward to organizing some of my own online events next year to promote WAtF. I do hope that this a trend that keeps up even after COVID-19 finally leaves us, that there are increased opportunities for online events (or, options to tune in online to in-person events) to include more people in bookish activities.

SP: Now, to lighten things up! 

Is SAM a…

Plotter/pantster? 

Planster! Haha. I always have an outline–can’t draft without it. But every time, as I actually start writing a new story, I’m struck by new ideas that come to me as I sink into the story world and characters’ lives. I always give myself the freedom to explore these new ideas, especially in the first few drafts, because often they result in my best and most creative story elements.

Last book you read?

Just finished Nafizaa Azad’s The Candle and the Flame (amazing and atmospheric! Gorgeous writing, stunning world-building, a compelling romance, and food descriptions that will leave you drooling). Currently, I’m reading an ARC (advance readers’ copy) of Louisa Onomé’s Like Home, a contemporary YA novel about gentrification and friendship on the rocks. Look for this book next February!

Current dream vacation spot?

Iceland! Took a short trip to Reykjavík in Spring 2019 to explore the setting of another one of my books. Mostly I stayed in the city; now, I’d love to go back and see more of the country. You know, when traveling is safe again…

Something always in your fridge? 

Almond milk! Is that a boring answer? I switched over to drinking it while I was pregnant with my first child (Little T)… then realized I liked it so much better than cow’s milk, so I kept on drinking it.

Would you rather be a professional: Marine Biologist? Spy? Opera Singer? Brain Surgeon? OR?

I think being a spy would be thrilling! Don’t know that I’d be any good at it–I’m such a nervous person! But sneaking around uncovering useful secrets seems really empowering.

Favorite childhood book?  

The Velveteen Rabbit. I just love the gorgeous writing, and the meditation on the question, “What is real?” What does it mean to be a real, genuine living being?

SP: Thanks so much for sharing with us, Sam! We are eagerly anticipating your book!

Be sure to connect with SAM!

ADD social media links here.

Buy links:

Nova, Signing off

Nova McBee, author of Calculated & The Never Vows

Guest Post: “Beginning in the Middle” by Author Laura Moe

In the monthly writing workshop I conduct at a local library, the other night I talked about Write Your Novel From the Middle by James Scott Bell. The concept is described as “like popping open the hood and showing writers how they can be intentional about the story.”

In this book, Bell claims that for a book to be effective, there must be a “mirror moment” where the main character can literally or figuratively look in the mirror and questions his/her beliefs about himself. It helps enormously to know the middle moment/mirror moment, because knowing this moment “illuminates the entire book you’re trying to write. It’s the “deep tissue of the story,” (or the engine that drives it.) which many writers don’t discover until much later, sometimes after several drafts or even once the book is published.

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Author Interview: Dante Medema

Pen friends ~ Another fantastic interview from debut author, Dante Medema, talking about her upcoming book, The Truth Project, coming out with Harper Teen this fall! She also shares about her querying journey, her 5-editor 6 figure auction dream acquisition story (& the crazy event that followed that news!), and her thoughts on dreamy Alaska settings.

danteSP: Hi Dante! Thanks for joining us! Before we get into book stuff, we’d LOVE to know a bit about you and your writing journey?

DM: Thanks for having me! I’ve always loved writing. I took a creative writing course in college and I remember thinking “I can’t believe how much fun this is!” Then after my husband and I started our family, I stayed home with the kids, and it became my outlet. Somewhere in there I thought “maybe I could try to do this for real” and I made a go of it! Continue reading

Agent Interview: Hannah VanVels, Corvisiero Literary Agency

Pen Friends ~ Today we have a very special guest, Hannah VanVels, once an acquisition editor for Harper Collins Blink, and now a literary agent. Don’t miss her thoughts on publishing, tips on querying, thoughts on the slush pile, and her current wishlist!

Hannah VanvelsSP: Hi Hannah! First, congratulations on joining the Corvisiero Literary Team! I’m excited to have you on the Spinning Pen for our first ever AGENT interview!  Continue reading

Author Interview: Jessica Olson, Sing Me Forgotten

Pen Friends ~ I am so excited for you! In this interview you get to meet the lovely, writer mom, Pitch Wars Alum, YA Author Jessica Olson and hear about her incredible her debut, Sing Me Forgotten, out with Inkyard/Harper Collins in 2021. As you know, we are huge fans of championing author’s debut work, so click here to add it on Goodreads and enjoy all of the amazing gems she has shared in this interview!

joSP: Hi Jessica! Thanks for joining us! Before we get into book stuff, we’d LOVE to know a bit about you and your writing journey?

JO: I’ve been writing books since kindergarten, and I’m pretty sure my parents still have stacks of the books I wrote and illustrated as a kid moldering up in their attic. Compelling stories about little girls that got castles for Christmas and went on picnics and ate peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. When I fell in love with Harry Potter as a young teen was when I moved on from writing (terrible) picture books to writing (even worse) novels. I was constantly scribbling stories in notebooks instead of paying attention in class during middle school and high school, much to my teachers’ frustration.

I started pursuing publication in college with a YA contemporary issue novel that I thought was the best thing ever written but was actually a pile of stinking garbage. I obviously was not able to get an agent with that manuscript, but I did not give up. I queried twice more over the next few years with two other manuscripts, slowly getting more and more interest in my stories—which showed I was improving—but no bites quite yet.

It wasn’t until I submitted Sing Me Forgotten to PitchWars in 2018 and was chosen as a mentee that things kind of took off. I received several requests from the PitchWars showcase, and I had my first offer of representation within 48 hours. After multiple offers, I chose to sign with Christa Heschke of McIntosh & Otis, and we went on submission shortly thereafter.

SMF went on to receive multiple offers from publishers, so Christa conducted an auction, which was a surreal and insane experience. I didn’t sleep or eat basically that whole week! Though all of the editors who made offers were wonderful, and they all seemed to be so excited for SMF, we decided to go with Lauren at Inkyard because she felt like the best fit for the book and shared the same vision I had for what the story could be.

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7 Killer Approaches to Writing a Killer Opening Line

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As we know, a good first line of a book (and chapter) can do much more than just begin the story. It grabs our attention, sets the tone, reveals something to come, lets us taste the narrative & voice, gives the first impression, and can be locked into our memory for years to come IF it is done well.

Look at the 7 approaches below and study them. (FYI: Thanks to Lorie Langdon for sharing these with us!)

I’ve also added links to some of the most popular first lines in YA Literature. Compare, enjoy, and then mentally put them into their correct categories. Then look at your own first lines. Where does it fit? Practice rewriting your first sentence. And if you are so bold, share it in the comments!

  1. A statement of eternal principle

– Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice: “It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.”

– Paper Towns by John Green: “The way I figure it, everyone gets a miracle.”

 

  1. A statement that conveys the narrative

– Isak Dinesen’s Out of Africa: “I had a farm in Africa.”

– Stardust by Neil Gaiman: “There once was a young man who wished to gain his Heart’s Desire.”

 

  1. Characterization

– Stephen King’s 11/22/63: “I have never been what you’d call a crying man.”

– The Old Man and The Sea by Ernest Hemingway: “He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and he had gone eighty-four days now without taking a fish..”

 

  1. Start mid-action

– Lorie’s current WIP:A brisk gale whipped the sea into peaks that pitched the Skylark around like a leaf in a flooded stream.

– The Sound and the Fury by William Faulkner: Through the fence, between the curling flower spaces, I could see them hitting.

 

  1. A statement of paired facts

– Six of Crows by Leigh Bardugo:Joost had two problems: the moon and his mustache.

– A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens: It was the best of times, it was the worst of times…

  1. 6. Statement laced with significance and/or conflict

– Heather Webb’s Becoming Josephine: The missive arrived in the night.

  • DOON by Corp and Langdon:I skidded to a halt in the crowded corridor, totally unprepared for a showdown with the evil witch of Bainbridge High.
  1. 7. Start with setting that evokes emotion, establishes mood, or raises questions

-A Court of Thorns and Roses by Sarah J. Maas:The forest had become a labyrinth of snow and ice.

-Maria V. Snyer’s Poison Study: Locked in darkness that surrounded me like a coffin, I had nothing to distract me from my memories.

 

LINKS:

https://www.bustle.com/articles/164702-20-ya-novels-that-will-hook-you-from-the-first-line

https://www.barnesandnoble.com/blog/teen/15-of-the-best-opening-lines-in-ya/ 

https://www.huffpost.com/entry/38-best-first-lines-in-no_b_8836484

 

Thanks Lorie, for sharing your tips with us! *Find Lorie’s books on amazon here & her website.

Nova, signing off!